I agree. He was asking for help and I couldn't get 1/2 way through the first post without getting lost. Now his posts are easy to read and he's still here sharing the details of his project. He'll probably get more answers to his questions now. People are making a big deal out of nothing.
Nobody called it offensive or said anything condescending about it. I just asked that he break it up into something that resembled sentences and paragraphs. Hardly sounds like being the "forum police". I was just trying to be helpful.
I'd expect to be corrected if I was asking for help and my post was unreadable. I don't think that was the first time someone was asked to break it up a little. Maybe it never happened to a new member before.